Finalized Scope Language

After SDPi Friday review 3 November.

asciidoc/volume1/tf1-ch-2-overview.adoc

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 The Service-oriented Device Point-of-care Interoperability (SDPi) Profile specifications encompass the following application scope:
 
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 . The SDPi specifications provide detailed instructions for seamless plug-and-play interoperability between ISO/IEEE 11073 SDC-based medical devices (including SaMD), as well as between medical devices and health IT systems based on HL7 FHIR and HL7 Version 2.
-Key considerations include safety, security and effectiveness for data reporting, alert notification, device-external control and other high-acuity (e.g., ICU, OR, Step-Down, Emergency response) use cases.
-Provision is made for coordination of individual device functional contributions to support Clinical System Functions.
+Key considerations include enabling safe, secure and effective interoperability for data reporting, alert notification, device-external control and other high-acuity point-of-care  use cases.
+Provision is made for coordination of individual device functional contributions to support clinical system functions that are provided by two or more participants.
 
 
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-. _Safe, effective and secure medical device interoperability_
-. Optimized for high-acuity points of care (e.g., operating room, intensive care, and emergency)
-. utilizing services oriented architectures
-. providing seamless plug-and-play connectivity
-. between medical devices, health software (incl. SaMD), and other health-related systems and technologies
-. supporting medical reporting, alerting external control and other capabilities
-. and coordination / coupling between multiple devices for achieving clinical system functions
-. ecosystem (vendor independent) of ... products ...
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+Notes:
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+1. High-acuity points of care include operating rooms (OR), intensive care units (ICU), step-down units, and emergency care.
+2. Clinical system function example:  Physiological monitoring of a patient's condition as they are being weaned off of a ventilator.
+3. "SaMD" is Software as a Medical Device, including "clinical apps"; they are a class of Health Software.
+4. ISO/IEEE 11073 Service-oriented Device Connectivity (SDC) standards provide a Services Oriented Architecture (SOA) specification for safe, effective and secure medical device interoperability (SES MDI).
 
 
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