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 :title: Keycloak DevDay 2025 Pre-Conf Event Announcement
-:date: 2024-10-21
+:date: 2024-10-24
 :publish: true
 :author: Sebastian Rose
 
-Keycloak Dev Day 2025 is just around the corner, and we would like to invite you to a special pre-event: the Keycloak Hackathon!
+https://keycloak-day.dev/[Keycloak DevDay 2025] is just around the corner, and we would like to invite you to a special pre-event: the Keycloak Hackathon!
 
 == Hackathon: actively help shape Keycloak
-On the day before Dev Day (5th of march), from 10:00 a.m., our hackathon will start, giving you the opportunity to actively contribute to the further development of Keycloak.
+On the day before DevDay, on March 5, our hackathon will give you the opportunity to actively contribute to the further development of Keycloak.
 Whether you write code, work on the documentation, improve translations or maintain issues in the issue tracker - everyone
 can take part. The hackathon offers you the opportunity to pitch new ideas and work together in small groups on exciting projects.
 
 == Schedule of the hackathon
-*10:00 am*: Start of the first iteration with a pitch round. Here you can present your ideas and topics, ranging from new features and bug fixes to documentation improvements. The teams start working on the pitched topics. Our goal is to achieve measurable results by the end of the day - be it through code contributions, documentation or other important improvements for the Keycloak community.
+*10:00*: Start of the first iteration with a pitch round. Here you can present your ideas and topics, ranging from new features and bug fixes to documentation improvements. The teams start working on the pitched topics. Our goal is to achieve measurable results by the end of the day - be it through code contributions, documentation or other important improvements for the Keycloak community.
 
 *12:30*: Lunch-break
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ If you have an idea or a topic that you would like to work on at the hackathon,
 If you would like to work on a topic but don't yet know exactly what you would like to take part in, please let us know. We try to organise teams and topics at an early stage so that you can get in touch with like-minded people in advance.
 
 == How can you take part?
-Participation is easy: Register on the Keycloak Dev Day website and join us! The hackathon offers a great opportunity to contribute in a relaxed atmosphere and to talk to other participants.
+Participation is easy: Grab your free pre-event ticket on the https://keycloak-day.dev/[Keycloak DevDay website] and join us! The hackathon offers a great opportunity to contribute in a relaxed atmosphere and to talk to other participants.
 to get into conversation.
 
 We look forward to seeing you at the hackathon and working together on the future of Keycloak. Let's code, document, and contribute - together for Keycloak!